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| quote  = We call upon the Seersong, Who witnesses / who divines / who completes a Whole
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| quote  = We call upon the Seersong, Who witnesses / who divines / whose gaze pierces the heavens
 
| origin  = From-Flesh, From-Nowhere, From-Steel
 
| origin  = From-Flesh, From-Nowhere, From-Steel
 
| titles  = The Otherfang, The Completion, The Seersong
 
| titles  = The Otherfang, The Completion, The Seersong
 
| names  = Shared them with Our Majesty Revamped, who still remains.
 
| names  = Shared them with Our Majesty Revamped, who still remains.
| aspects = {{Aspect|Lantern}} {{Aspect|Edge}}
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| aspects = {{Aspect|Lantern}} {{Aspect|Edge}} {{Aspect|Forge}}
 
| arrival = [Neph is bad at timelines]
 
| arrival = [Neph is bad at timelines]
 
| owners  = [[User:Nephilim|A very particular sort of creator]]
 
| owners  = [[User:Nephilim|A very particular sort of creator]]
 
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Our Majesty Revamped's other half. He didn't make it.  
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Our Majesty Revamped's other half.  
  
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He didn't make it.
  
 
==Description==
 
==Description==
 
===History===
 
===History===
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In the land of sands, stars and sciences -
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- Where Rocs lay to rest and gilded serpents walk the roads of Man -
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- Where the future goes to be reshaped, reborn ablaze as a simurgh facing its end -
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- Was an empire ruled by Seer-King '''[NAME PURGED FROM HISTORY]''' and his [[Our Majesty Revamped|bold, merciless wife]] -
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- Bearing the symbols of Destiny and Fate -
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- Their all-sight brought their realm prosperity and illumination -
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- Until one day, they disappeared without a trace -
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- And their names were lost to time -
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- But their descendants still reign, in envy of their ever-watchful ancestors -
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- They will not fall, until the clouds cry steel and the earth bleeds fire -
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- Until the veil beyond can be pierced no more -
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- The Seer-In-Song has fallen! Long live, o Thrice-Crowned one! -
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- She who has faced the beyond! She who has braved the abyss! She whose scale is metal and Forge! -
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- May she watch over what is left, what is lost!
  
 
===Appearance===
 
===Appearance===
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The Seersong has had three definite appearances through his life, all the way to his ending.
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It appeared primarily as a highway-patterned ball python, where its base scales were a dark crimson and its markings rose-gold. He had bright orange eyes like a rising dawn, and wore a bejeweled crown.
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Upon joining his partner in self-reforging, he became something different - His scales were grey steel, though he retained his rosegold markings. His body was mechanical, and his crown was split in half - wearing a half of his own crown, and a half of Our Majesty Revamped's.
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And yet, sometimes, it still held onto the form it once had as a fleshling - A bronze-skinned, forest-eyed, sable-haired man with the robes of a seer and the headwear of a king, holding a wooden staff sculpted into two entwined snakes. Though he did make the personal addition of a matching serpentine tail.
  
 
===Principles===
 
===Principles===
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==Secrets==
 
==Secrets==
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Kismet?...
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... Kismet, can you see me?
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It's so cold in here, and so dark...
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Is this what i wanted? Is this what... '''we''' wanted?
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This isn't the future we saw in the stars.
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I still love you. Even now...
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...
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Thank you, For everything.

Latest revision as of 14:22, 17 October 2019

Our Excellence Undone
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"We call upon the Seersong, Who witnesses / who divines / whose gaze pierces the heavens"
Origin From-Flesh, From-Nowhere, From-Steel
Titles The Otherfang, The Completion, The Seersong
Names Shared them with Our Majesty Revamped, who still remains.
Aspects Lantern Edge Forge
Date of arrival [Neph is bad at timelines]
Owner(s) A very particular sort of creator

Our Majesty Revamped's other half.

He didn't make it.

Description

History

In the land of sands, stars and sciences -

- Where Rocs lay to rest and gilded serpents walk the roads of Man -

- Where the future goes to be reshaped, reborn ablaze as a simurgh facing its end -

- Was an empire ruled by Seer-King [NAME PURGED FROM HISTORY] and his bold, merciless wife -

- Bearing the symbols of Destiny and Fate -

- Their all-sight brought their realm prosperity and illumination -

- Until one day, they disappeared without a trace -

- And their names were lost to time -

- But their descendants still reign, in envy of their ever-watchful ancestors -

- They will not fall, until the clouds cry steel and the earth bleeds fire -

- Until the veil beyond can be pierced no more -

- The Seer-In-Song has fallen! Long live, o Thrice-Crowned one! -

- She who has faced the beyond! She who has braved the abyss! She whose scale is metal and Forge! -

- May she watch over what is left, what is lost!

Appearance

The Seersong has had three definite appearances through his life, all the way to his ending.

It appeared primarily as a highway-patterned ball python, where its base scales were a dark crimson and its markings rose-gold. He had bright orange eyes like a rising dawn, and wore a bejeweled crown.

Upon joining his partner in self-reforging, he became something different - His scales were grey steel, though he retained his rosegold markings. His body was mechanical, and his crown was split in half - wearing a half of his own crown, and a half of Our Majesty Revamped's.

And yet, sometimes, it still held onto the form it once had as a fleshling - A bronze-skinned, forest-eyed, sable-haired man with the robes of a seer and the headwear of a king, holding a wooden staff sculpted into two entwined snakes. Though he did make the personal addition of a matching serpentine tail.

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Secrets

Kismet?...

... Kismet, can you see me?

It's so cold in here, and so dark...

Is this what i wanted? Is this what... we wanted?

This isn't the future we saw in the stars.

I still love you. Even now...

...

Thank you, For everything.