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♣️[[The Crimson Temptress]] - Falls flat on actual development, even if i am very fond of her design. Only really exists because of the Listless King (thank you based Will), but what really makes her shine is her "children", the Amaranthine Aristocracy. They're everything I've wanted to make for ages - a fully developed spirit-race of artistic monstergirl/boy cannibals who are FLOWER ONI BUG PEOPLE and I'm just really fond of their design.
❤️[[The Toymaker]] - Easily the worst Hour made under me, by far. An absolutely flat character with zero personality whatsoever. I don't at all resonate with his concept (For future reference, i don't know what the hell i was thinking when i followed through with this Hour - I hate children! And especially writing them!) even if i DO like the idea of "eldritch-ifying" fairytales like Jack Tales or the tooth fairy.
I'll give him one thing, though. The Marble Urchins are fun to write for.
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🌹The Skinwalker - A testament to my failures, and why i should remember to stop licking modboots and scrap ideas early on when they're not going in the direction i hoped they would. At least he got an afterlife as a Mare-Name.
🌹The Evermolt - Honestly, this one had some degree of potential, and i loved its design, but it was INEVITABLY going to turn into a "is he a snibling? Isn't he?" type of plot, which i despise writing (Outcasts aren't fun for the person playing them!) so i scrapped him.